by pmcolt » Fri Aug 10, 2007 3:25 pm
Indeed you are right,
But your senryu has excess
syllables, so there. :P
Very well, I shall
Attempt to write a haiku
About nature then.
The happy squirrel
Eats seed from the bird feeder;
Out comes the rifle.
Walking through the woods,
Off in the distance I spot
Bigfoot: he runs away.
Llamas are truly
Creatures both noble and proud;
A worthy mascot.
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